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i loved that you were a story by ~0rchid:icon0rchid:





i loved your stories;
i loved that you were a story,
because i could read that book a thousand times,
and it would still smell new
each time i broke it's spine.

i wrapped my own words around the margins,
until every empty inch was inked-in.
i wrote my own footnotes
for each reference i didn't understand,
until i didn't know which was of my own hand.

i'd try and read it from right-to-left
which left me more-or-less in quite a mess.
i discussed it with barthes, and he said
it made complete sense (in context)
inside a house we built
which was planned in metres
but measured in feet
bad for furniture,
great conversation piece.

i loved your stories;
i loved that you were a story,
because i could read that book a thousand times,
and it would still smell new
each time i broke it's spine.
©2004-2009 ~0rchid
:icon0rchid:

Author's Comments

and here i dreamt i was an architect...

(this kind of follows on from [link] but i guess that's obvious from the title)

edit: apparently the photo isn't very clear (not that anyone's commented as such, but you're all such shy souls).
it says ""the bottom of a bottle is not some kind of narnia like wardrobe door thing"

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:icongirlsvomit-candy:
ugh. you really make me jealous. i wish i knew you better so i could fuck your writing, or something ;)

I really really love the way you write and what you write about.

--
There's things we do to the people that we love.
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:icongirlsvomit-candy:
I will! The problem with my MSN though, is that it goes through this thing called "I Feel Like Acting Like Shit Right Now" and it'll do that for about a month or so. I'm too lazy to download the new version, so it's understandable.

--
There's things we do to the people that we love.
:icongoldilox8264:
Wonderful job! ^.^ Kudos for you!

--
Loneliness doesnt require the absence of everything,
just the things you love the most, the things you need
:iconlovedy0ufrmthestart:
wow.
this is amazing.
this is genius.

there's simply no better way to put it.
"i loved that you were a story,
because i could read that book a thousand times,
and it would still smell new
each time i broke it's spine."

--
FEAR ME! i am a harbinger of your demise

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